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Nara Shikatopu
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PostSubject: Shikatopu's Skills   Mon Oct 07, 2013 6:49 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Shikatopu's Skills   Mon Oct 07, 2013 6:58 pm

Alright, good first attempt but unfortunately you did a few things wrong:

Ok first off is the abilities, you are only using 2 of your 7 Ability points, Because due to your genjutsu 2 knowledge you get genjutsu resistance 1 for free. So you can also pick up another ability along with that. Free abilities don't count toward your total.

Second your jutsus, please separate them by type such as basic, kenjutsu, ninjutsu, genjutsu etc.

Finally when you post the jutsu please post the entire jutsu
Such as:
Name: Waza no Jutsu [Walking Technique]
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Chakra
Rank: E
Orientation: Supplementary
Cost:
Effects: This technique is a must for any Shinobi. Difficult for some genins, Waza consists of basic manipulation of chakra through the fit. This is done through two ways. First, they may concentrate chakra to their soles to because adhesive, allowing them to walk on normally impossible surfaces, such as walls or a tree. Second, the user may force their chakra downward to act as a method of balance which grants them the ability to walk on water. Both take a constant concentration of chakra, and thus must be maintained each turn of usage for one chakra. This does not require hand seals.

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Waza no Jutsu [Walking Technique]: This technique is a must for any Shinobi. Difficult for some genins, Waza consists of basic manipulation of chakra through the fit. This is done through two ways. First, they may concentrate chakra to their soles to because adhesive, allowing them to walk on normally impossible surfaces, such as walls or a tree. Second, the user may force their chakra downward to act as a method of balance which grants them the ability to walk on water. Both take a constant concentration of chakra, and thus must be maintained each turn of usage for one chakra. This does not require hand seals.



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PostSubject: Re: Shikatopu's Skills   Mon Oct 07, 2013 7:23 pm

Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Shikatopu's Skills   Mon Oct 07, 2013 7:40 pm

Unfortunately you can only have three abilities as a genin to distribute your points across, not counting the free genjutsu resistance. So you'll have to drop three of them. Then redistribute your points accordingly
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PostSubject: Re: Shikatopu's Skills   Mon Oct 07, 2013 7:47 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Shikatopu's Skills   Mon Oct 07, 2013 8:06 pm

OK, final thing, get this done and we are good.. It is confusing in the rules so its not your fault, that I will be fixing.. The points for the skills are cumulative.

So:
     Level 1 = 1ASP.
      Level 2 = 3ASP (+2ASP)
      Level 3 = 6ASP (+ 3ASP)
      Master Level: 10ASP. (+4 ASP)

So instead of using 7 ASP, you are currently using 11ASP
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PostSubject: Re: Shikatopu's Skills   Mon Oct 07, 2013 8:24 pm

Ah, gotcha. Fixed it up.
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PostSubject: Re: Shikatopu's Skills   Mon Oct 07, 2013 8:27 pm

Alright Approved.

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